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This is awesome!! Fuck yes, Sid!!

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Thank you so much for reading I genuinely really appreciate it and the nice words! Its the first short story I have shared online, I'm thinking I might try and expand it and make some refinements.

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That was wild! A lot of fun, well done!

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Thanks for reading! I’m really pleased you enjoyed it 😀

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“Callum screamed and as the blood gushed out Sid felt himself being sucked out too. Like an airplane window had just smashed.” Love the imagery of Sid fighting to stay in a body. Fun story!

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Thank you for reading! I appreciate it a lot! Let me know if you have any particular pieces you want people to check out.

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